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Lynne Yagel's avatar

This really had me scratching my head! We all laugh about writing "We're eating, Grandma" without the comma - but I love your application. How often do I jump to the end of the paragraph or interrupt a friend because I assume I know what is being presented? This is especially important when the author / my friend is one who thinks creatively or in a different way than I do. Whether for enjoyment or analysis, we need to employ our 2 ears (or 2 eyes) for more than 2 seconds to actually absorb something. Thanks!

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Jonathan Yagel's avatar

Well said!

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Anna A. Friedrich's avatar

This is, in one sense, what poetry is all about!

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Jonathan Yagel's avatar

Yes! Such a good point. This reminds me of the concept of 'defamiliarization'—poetry and art have to break us out of the standard flow of things.

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